LeruoME's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[pawles22 - ElectroVolt ("The Unimaginable Travel" album #1)]

So incredible name for an album !
the atmosphere really describes this feeling of travel (idk if it means something lol).
Synths (especially the one with delay) are pretty cool.
The drums are very very very very cool.
There's a problem with a note. You shouldn't put a VII when there's a I.

pawles22 responds:

Thanks! <3

[F-777 - The Lost Vikings (2015)]

I think it's one of my favourites track of you. Yes, it's not well mixed but the composition is amazing.

F-777 responds:

Thank you so much!!! the laptop i had i made it on is completely broke. I could do a final master but it would be on a WAV then lossness more on quality XD.

Thank you so much.

[Hills and Valleys]

I don't think it's your first track (if it is, good job !) and I like it. However, I think you can improve the mix by lower the volume of the drums and lower some of the hi-freq on the snare. You should also add more hi hats variations. The bell synth who plays the theme sounds very cheap but the piano sounds very good(I think you can add a little bit of high mids). You should also add a bass and lower the initial bass.
The master is not very good, between 0:47 and 1:35, the bass is too loud and drums too. You should compress a little the master track.

If you think I'm a little bit harsh, don't worry, I like your track (and my note is not bad) ! Melodies are good and the snare sample sounds great !

Your music has tons of qualities but I said you what is not good in this music. Sorry for that !

Good luck!

PilotPaladin responds:

Thank you for your response, I am not quite done with it apparently, so I'll make tose edits! Thanks again!

[Suspense Run]

i use Xpand!2 too

how did you get it ?

Kemor responds:

I got it from the AKAI MPK MINI MKII.. Pretty much a mini keyboard.

[pawles22 - Plain Adventures]

sorry for this feedback

I don't like this song.

the lead is not bad but it sounds bad (there is a frequency that is too loud)

the first pad is weird because the notes don't correspond to the scale used (it's good after)

the drums are boring (it would be fine with hi hats)

the bass is very good

Here I told you all the faults of this music without telling you its qualities. They are not absent but for a medium music (for me) it's better to say its faults rather than its qualities. That way, the next will only be better!

That's all. I am sorry

pawles22 responds:

Don't be sorry man! I won't be mad at you for stating your opinion! :D

We just all have different taste. Just because I personally disagree with what you said doesn't mean I'll hate you, even though I really like this song myself :P

All I expect from people is to say the truth! Like you pointed out - there's no place for improvement if you lie or skip the bad sides of the song!

I don't see what's wrong with the lead honestly, I find it okay actually. Besides, the tool I used didn't even allow me to make it better.

I don't know what's wrong with the first pad, either. It's the same as all of the other ones, uses the same scale and has the same structure.

As for the drums, I didn't want to make it a fast-paced song, so I skipped hi-hats.

Again, thanks for stating your opinion! Peace! :)

[pawles22 - Depth]

You shouldn't use the same synth for bass and lead. It makes weird. And sometimes, try changing the drum pattern.

But I like the drum samples

pawles22 responds:

They aren't the same synths... they are just similar :P

I would probably change the drum pattern, but it wasn't such a great song in my opinion anyway. Thanks for your opinion, though. I appreciate it! :)

[SoFtBOILeD-By Your Side]

I like these drops and the part at 3:29 .
Personally, I like this track BUT I think there are defects
There's a problem of rythm in the first part, When you use a delay, make sure you have adjusted the tempo sync.
In the drop, there are not enough low frequencies, you should have added a sub.
The qualities are that DRUMS, THERE ARE SO INCREDIBLE.
The chords are pretty cool! (and untypical)
You must continue in this way (but with a better mix) and you will be able to produce really cool songs!

And, fuck stall and chansey(and soft boiled) ... sorry ...

SoFtBOILeD responds:

Thanks for the feedback, I try to get as much feedback as I can to try to inprove them for later projects. I won't lie and say that I did feel, after uploading it, that the melody with the beginning to the beginning of the "cool down" was off.

Also I am not offended by the Chansey shenanigans, I struggle with Chansey when literally all of my physical attackers and stall mons are just DEAD.

Thanks again for providing me with the reasoning for your rating!

[pawles22 - The Fairy Glade]

Great job ! I think you should add a little snare when there's a kick

pawles22 responds:

Thanks.

Huh, maybe you're right. Maybe it would sound a little better with a subtle snare? :P

[Amazing World]

It's incredible! I really like that. If I had to say something, I'd say that the beginning is a little bit harsh for a beginning.

Spline-1337 responds:

Thank! I'm glad you liked it!

[pawles22 - Electric Dash]

Amazing, very good

pawles22 responds:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :)